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History of Tennis VideoGames (Spanish Article)

Postby Nigogu » 15 May 2014, 19:42

Hello,

My first article (in spanish) as an Sports Journalist, a little tribute to all the Tennis Games (including Tennis Elbow).
Visit it if you want :arrow: http://www.matchtenis.com/videojuegos-y ... -de-tenis/

Mi primer artículo (en español) como Periodista Deportivo, un pequeño tributo a todos los VideoJuegos de Tenis.
Visítalo acá :arrow: http://www.matchtenis.com/videojuegos-y ... -de-tenis/

Kind regards,
Nigogu :jap:
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Re: History of Tennis VideoGames (Spanish Article)

Postby Algo » 15 May 2014, 21:11

Pretty good actually.
You missed a "que" in last sentence, before "cada". As a criticism, if you want it.
Or you could've changed it to something like "estos juegos de corporaciones (maybe empresas or desarrolladoras) independientes son cada vez más populares", naming which are those, but obviously not praising them, they are not as good as TE :twisted:
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Re: History of Tennis VideoGames (Spanish Article)

Postby Nigogu » 16 May 2014, 02:45

Thanks Algo,
Yes, i also missed a couple of ''tildes'', and you're right the text has also that little of redaction mistake :?
That's my fault, but it's also fault of reviewers because they deleted a sentence in the last paragraph that makes it a little weird :oops:
They also deleted a ''más'' and re-wrote it without ´. ':D
But i have to thank them because they published my article, i'm kind of happy :blackeye:
And yes, Long Live to Tennis Elbow :!: :mrgreen:
Thanks for your post, have a nice day :jap:
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