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Re: Animation 101 : Tutorial & Tips, WIPs & Critics

PostPosted: 30 Mar 2012, 19:41
by hamzafederer
megyaem30 wrote:coming back in some hours!! hope that Neeky already upload my first anim!! :dance:
BTW Neeky!!..you solved the problem with m4n4c0rs anims?? :sweat: i really want to used it in my version!! :mrgreen:



i hope so

Re: Animation 101 : Tutorial & Tips, WIPs & Critics

PostPosted: 30 Mar 2012, 20:39
by SamModder
Megayem I can't really find things to improve :p I think it's pretty nice like that! And may i know who you want to create in the next strokes? :)

Re: Animation 101 : Tutorial & Tips, WIPs & Critics

PostPosted: 30 Mar 2012, 20:42
by achraf federer
fish and berdych serve will be GreaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaT !!!!!

Re: Animation 101 : Tutorial & Tips, WIPs & Critics

PostPosted: 30 Mar 2012, 22:55
by Lucian86
Finished it ! A little bit different than the first version...I'm 85% satisfied, enough to upload it (maybe I'm going to do a second version someday)....I wanted to do it more real than that (I actually did it) but it just doesn't look good in the game

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BXOT_OBv ... e=youtu.be

To make a comparison with the Berdych's real forehand

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dopQHhVPLKc



Hope you like it
Be honest about it ;)

I also sent the files to McDeez ;)

Re: Animation 101 : Tutorial & Tips, WIPs & Critics

PostPosted: 30 Mar 2012, 22:58
by SamModder
Very very good man thank you it looks great! Don't worry I think it is pretty nice ingame ;) Are you going to make other strokes Lucian? If yes may I know from which players please?

Re: Animation 101 : Tutorial & Tips, WIPs & Critics

PostPosted: 30 Mar 2012, 23:13
by Lucian86
Yes, I'm going to do others but I'm going to take my time...This one took me a lot of hours yesterday and today

I was thinking about Nalbandian's forehand and backhand (he's my second favourite player) but since the backhand in particular is maybe the most beautiful two-hand backhand in the world, I'm going to let "m4n4c0r" to do it (if he wants it :) )...he's more talented than me

So, I think I'm going to go on with Berdych's backhand

Re: Animation 101 : Tutorial & Tips, WIPs & Critics

PostPosted: 30 Mar 2012, 23:15
by Redas
I think it's well better Lucian ! The Berdych's full pack would be great, but of course you decide :)

Re: Animation 101 : Tutorial & Tips, WIPs & Critics

PostPosted: 31 Mar 2012, 01:47
by MarianoEG
SamModder wrote:Megayem I can't really find things to improve :p I think it's pretty nice like that! And may i know who you want to create in the next strokes? :)

thanks Sam..im going to uploaded it on Neekys thread then... :mrgreen: and bout the next strokes ill made...i dont know yet...because this week im working until next friday and got no time to grab the pc :sweat: but meanwhile im going to think what to do..i was thinking on the nalby backhand...not because everybody requested (as Neeky and M4n4c0r,i dont take requests neither ':D) but because is a really dare...but im affraid that takes me looooong time...maybe i try to do his forehand...but it will not be known until next weekend :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
thanks for your coments,critics and suggestions man!!!! :dance: :dance:

Re: Animation 101 : Tutorial & Tips, WIPs & Critics

PostPosted: 31 Mar 2012, 02:55
by MarianoEG
Lucian86 wrote:Finished it ! A little bit different than the first version...I'm 85% satisfied, enough to upload it (maybe I'm going to do a second version someday)....I wanted to do it more real than that (I actually did it) but it just doesn't look good in the game

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BXOT_OBv ... e=youtu.be

To make a comparison with the Berdych's real forehand

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dopQHhVPLKc

EDIT:thats amazing job man!! :applause: :applause: I make a small suggestion if you do not mind :unsure: ...in your anim the right foot when berdych finished his stroke looks shortly and quickly.i mean that cut the movement..if you know what i mean? :D ..if you look closely at your vid from berdych youll see that does not cut his foot movement so fast ... Try it and watch it ... another thing you can try to do is give a little hop when it hits the ball .. that your feet do not slip much, if you can see the video of my murrays animation or some M4n4c0r one to know better what I'm talking to you...if you want it of course...thats only a suggestion...but as i said it before..your did it a great job with Berdych forehand :applause: :applause:

Re: Animation 101 : Tutorial & Tips, WIPs & Critics

PostPosted: 31 Mar 2012, 04:15
by MarianoEG
mmm...I decided to start a new animation ... :idea: :mrgreen: but I will quietly ... :whistle: if I can do, I'll upload it next weekend a vid ':D ... bout the backhand-slice of Djoko, I will send the file to Neeky ... and if he wants, he will post in his thread.
Thats all from me for now :applause: :applause: :dance:

Re: Animation 101 : Tutorial & Tips, WIPs & Critics

PostPosted: 31 Mar 2012, 10:54
by MarianoEG
dawn is already here in Argentina, 5:00 am ... :whistle: I'm at work and since I could not sleep a wink :sweat: , I started working on this animation ... Nalbandian's forehand ... I hope you enjoy! :dance: :dance:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ozyokTGAb88
I ll see your suggestions in the course of day my friends!! :yes: maybe in the afternoon. :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

Re: Animation 101 : Tutorial & Tips, WIPs & Critics

PostPosted: 31 Mar 2012, 11:38
by achraf federer
can anyone make a serves for fish and berdych tooo will be great it's good idea do you think ?

Re: Animation 101 : Tutorial & Tips, WIPs & Critics

PostPosted: 31 Mar 2012, 12:59
by SamModder
Nice! But it feels like the anim is too robotic/mecanical (the motion and also the feet positions feel wierd I think) and it doesn't make it fluid in game, this isn't right since Nalbandian is one of the most clean hitters in men tennis along with Federer... Maybe you could give a little more wrist action and give some more spin with some more bending on the knees?

maybe these could help





Re: Animation 101 : Tutorial & Tips, WIPs & Critics

PostPosted: 31 Mar 2012, 13:07
by SamModder
Look: 1) some positions problems, feets position, racket position (you bring the racket down too early I think) and finally left hand position ;)
2) Finishing needs a liiiiittle modifications on racket openning and feets
You can help yourself with the videos I posted

Re: Animation 101 : Tutorial & Tips, WIPs & Critics

PostPosted: 31 Mar 2012, 14:08
by achraf federer
Lucian86 are your animations for berdych forehand are for version 1.0c or 1.0d please i have just the full version of 1.0c i wan't this anim seriously please 1.0c and thanks !!!!!